Underneath a Car on the Highroad Between Abergavenny and Blaenarvon

Painting: “Castlerigg” by Catherine Edmunds. “Underneath a Car …” was written by Alexander James for Rattle’s Ekphrastic Challenge, May 2016, and selected by Edmunds as the Artist’s Choice winner.
The car broke down                 five miles from
home,                                 no-one in sight.
I stooped, cheek an                 inch from the wet
earth                                     and craned to look
underneath like                 I could spot the
fault,                                 try to fix it.
A snapped axle                 frames a blade of
green                                 engulfed by rust
verdant, rotting,                 speckled with cairns
hurled                               by nameless gods
in their gambles.                 Fronds shaggy, un-
trimmed,                           giving way
only to sheep,                         straggling, black eyes
glazed,                                 watching with all
the slack interest                 of those who have
never                                 considered death.
It’s the first time                 anyone has
ever                                 seen this, I say
to myself, before                 I begin to
hike                                 down the cliff side.
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